Comments for CALPURNIUS

Comment on Almost by David

David — Mon, 01 Feb 2010 14:59:08 +0000

Cool shot.

Comment on Seven Minutes by Laura

Laura — Thu, 31 Dec 2009 02:09:41 +0000

i really like how you made the ship kind of steampunk.

Comment on Crabby by Laura

Laura — Thu, 31 Dec 2009 01:31:21 +0000

Pretty cool that you have such a close up shot of the deer. :) Laura

Comment on Vigil by Laura

Laura — Mon, 19 Oct 2009 18:53:55 +0000

I think the story could be tighter. I’d like to see the Father a bit more demented or just right cold to the bone, something with more emotion.

Also, as I’m sitting here getting interrupted by my Mother before I can finish typing a sentence and feeling that frusration… why do people think they just need one bullet? What if he misses, what if one hits but doesn’t finish her off? Why not bring a round of bullets and make sure the job gets done right.

I’m glad you’re writing again. Will you get them published in print too?